ext_169568 ([identity profile] camelhaircoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kachelofen 2012-03-31 02:55 am (UTC)

"Goodbye, Theodore."

Thud. Betty, this one was amazing, from the very first word to the very last. The thought process throughout this chapter as we followed each character to reach the conclusion felt so realistic and not at all manipulated or contrived for the sake of plot advancement. I loved how you ended it on a lighter note,too, and so them.

This was definitely my favorite story so far; thank you for sharing your wonderful gift with us. Can't wait for the epilogue, but then I'll truly miss your Brian especially. Hmmmm, which will I reread while I not so patiently await your next?

*hug*
Amy

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