Let me first say thank you for the wonderful and unexpected gift. I was so excited when I saw it, I printed it out and read it while drinking a cool glass lemonade and eating some holiday chocolates. I live in Florida and the temp hit 84 degrees today. Yikes!
You were very cheeky to lead us on and make Brian the innocent one in the end. Once again, you took the obvious and turned it on its head. We are all so quick to think the worse of Brian, it would never occur to us that Justin was the reason for the fight.
What a wonderful surprise to visit this universe again. We got to see a matured Gus and a talking Naomi. We also got to see a loving and fatherly Brian. I think you captured perfectly how a mature Brain would be. I loved his honest interaction with his children and his realization that they both turned out healthy and well-adjusted.
I think the whole story rang true from start to finish. While Brian and Justin spent most of the story apart, we could still feel the love and uncertainty pulling them together. I think my favorite scene was when Justin came home, and Brian sensed it, and then described all of Justin’s habits.
I hope this will not be the last time we visit this story and universe. Now that Brian is a committed father to both Gus and Naomi, I think he is a more complete and interesting man.
I hope you had a safe travel and a glorious holiday.
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You were very cheeky to lead us on and make Brian the innocent one in the end. Once again, you took the obvious and turned it on its head. We are all so quick to think the worse of Brian, it would never occur to us that Justin was the reason for the fight.
What a wonderful surprise to visit this universe again. We got to see a matured Gus and a talking Naomi. We also got to see a loving and fatherly Brian. I think you captured perfectly how a mature Brain would be. I loved his honest interaction with his children and his realization that they both turned out healthy and well-adjusted.
I think the whole story rang true from start to finish. While Brian and Justin spent most of the story apart, we could still feel the love and uncertainty pulling them together. I think my favorite scene was when Justin came home, and Brian sensed it, and then described all of Justin’s habits.
I hope this will not be the last time we visit this story and universe. Now that Brian is a committed father to both Gus and Naomi, I think he is a more complete and interesting man.
I hope you had a safe travel and a glorious holiday.
Thanks again for the gift Betty!
Smiles!
Veronica